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2025B-图表作文解析与高分范文

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图表作文解析与高分范文

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  1. Directions: Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should

describe the table briefly, interpret the table, and give your comments. Write your essay in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) [Image Description]

A table titled “近年来全国居民平均每百户年末主要耐用消费品拥有量” (Ownership of Major Durable Consumer Goods per 100 Households at Year-End for National Residents in Recent Years). The table shows data for the years 2014, 2017, 2020, and 2023. The columns are “年份” (Year), “空调 (台)” (Air Conditioners (units)), “洗衣机 (台)” (Washing Machines (units)), and “电冰箱(柜) (台)” (Refrigerators/Freezers (units)). The data shows a consistent increase for all three categories over the years:

Air Conditioners: 75.2 → 96.1 → 117.7 → 145.9 Washing Machines: 83.7 → 91.7 → 96.7 → 98.2 Refrigerators: 85.5 → 95.3 → 101.8 → 103.4

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题目要求

根据下方图表写一篇160-200词的英语作文。文章应包含以下三点：

  1. 简要描述图表。
  2. 解读图表所反映的现象。
  3. 给出你的评论。

写作方向

该图表是一张表格，展示了从2014年到2023年，中国居民平均每百户家庭所拥有的三样主要耐用消费品（空调、洗衣机、电冰箱）的数量变化。

从数据中可以清晰地看到，这三类家电的拥有量在近十年间均呈现出持续、显著的增长趋势。特别是空调的增幅最为巨大，几乎翻了一番。

因此，写作可以遵循三段式结构：

  1. 第一段：简要描述图表内容，指出空调、洗衣机、冰箱三大件的保有量在2014至2023年间都稳定上升。
  2. 第二段：分析这一趋势背后的原因。核心原因可归结为中国经济的快速发展、居民可支配收入的增加以及生活水平的提高，使得过去被视为奢侈品的家电成为了现代生活的必需品。
  3. 第三段：发表评论。总结这一现象是社会进步和人民生活质量显著提升的有力证明，并可以对未来趋势做出简要展望。

作文

The table provided illustrates the change in ownership of major durable consumer goods among Chinese residents from 2014 to 2023. Specifically, it details the number of air conditioners, washing machines, and refrigerators owned per 100 households. A glance at the figures reveals a consistent and significant increase across all three categories over the decade. For instance, the ownership of air conditioners jumped remarkably from 75.2 to 145.9 units.

The reasons behind this upward trend are not difficult to find. First and foremost, China’s rapid economic development has led to a substantial rise in residents’ disposable income. With enhanced purchasing power, household appliances that were once considered luxuries are now viewed as basic necessities for a comfortable life. Furthermore, ongoing urbanization and the widespread pursuit of a higher quality of life have further fueled the demand for these modern conveniences.

From my perspective, this trend is a powerful indicator of the remarkable improvement in the living standards of Chinese people. It reflects not only material progress but also a societal shift towards greater comfort and convenience. As the economy continues to grow, we can anticipate this trend to persist, with households possibly seeking even more advanced and eco-friendly appliances in the future.

提示

好词好句 (Good Words & Phrases):

  1. illustrates the change in… （图表）阐明了……的变化。这是一个描述图表的常用句型。
  2. durable consumer goods 耐用消费品。指可以使用较长时间的商品，如家电、家具等。
  3. A glance at the figures reveals… 粗略看一下数据就能发现……，用于引出图表中最明显的趋势。
  4. consistent and significant increase 持续而显著的增长。
  5. The reasons behind this upward trend are… 这一上升趋势背后的原因是……，用于承上启下，开始分析原因。
  6. First and foremost 首先，最重要的是。用于引出最重要的原因。
  7. a substantial rise in residents’ disposable income 居民可支配收入的大幅上涨。
  8. purchasing power 购买力。
  9. pursuit of a higher quality of life 对更高生活品质的追求。
  10. a powerful indicator of… ……的有力指标/证明。
  11. remarkable improvement in the living standards 生活水平的显著提高。

生词词义 (Vocabulary):

  1. illustrate /ɪˈlʌstreɪt/ (v.) (图表)说明，阐明
  2. durable /ˈdʊrəbl/ (adj.) 耐用的，持久的
  3. consistent /kənˈsɪstənt/ (adj.) 一致的，持续的
  4. substantial /səbˈstænʃl/ (adj.) 大量的，可观的
  5. disposable income /dɪˈspoʊzəbl ˈɪnkʌm/ (n.) 可支配收入（指扣除税款后可用于消费或储蓄的收入）
  6. necessity /nəˈsesəti/ (n.) 必需品
  7. indicator /ˈɪndɪkeɪtər/ (n.) 指标，标志
  8. remarkable /rɪˈmɑːrkəbl/ (adj.) 非凡的，显著的

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