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2015A-英语应用文写作回复邮件介绍活动和寻求帮助

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英语应用文写作回复邮件介绍活动和寻求帮助

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  1. Directions: Read the following email from your classmate Paul and write him a reply.

Dear Li Ming,

I was really excited to hear that you’d invite some young craftsmen to demonstrate their innovative craft-making on campus. May I know more about what they’ll show? Also, I’d like to help with your preparation work. Please let me know what I can do.

Yours, Paul

Write your answer in about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not use your own name in the email; use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)

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题目要求

这是一封回复同学邮件的信函。考生需要以李明（Li Ming）的身份，给同学保罗（Paul）写一封约100词的回信。回信需要回答保罗的两个问题：1. 活动会展示哪些内容？2. 他可以帮忙做什么？

写作方向

这是一篇典型的小作文——建议信的回信。写作任务非常明确，必须包含两个核心信息点：

  1. 介绍活动详情：具体说明手工艺人将展示的“创新手工艺品”是什么。为了使内容具体，可以虚构1-2个有创意的工艺品，例如结合现代科技的传统手艺。
  2. 接受帮助并安排任务：感谢对方愿意帮忙，并给他安排一个具体、合理的工作，例如帮忙布置场地、分发宣传单或设计海报。

邮件的语气应友好、热情，结构清晰，确保两个问题都得到明确回复。

作文

Dear Paul,

Thanks for your email and your interest in the event. I’m so glad you’re excited about it.

The craftsmen will showcase a variety of innovative crafts. For instance, one will demonstrate modern paper-cutting that combines traditional patterns with lighting effects. Another will present miniature sculptures made from recycled materials, which is both artistic and eco-friendly.

I’m also very grateful for your offer to help. Your assistance would be greatly appreciated. We need someone to help design and put up posters around the campus to promote the activity. Would that be something you are interested in?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Ming

提示

这篇范文在100词左右，清晰地回应了提问，并安排了具体任务，符合题目要求。

好词好句 (Good Words and Phrases):

  1. Thanks for your email and your interest in the event.
  • 功能：邮件开头的常用句式，用于感谢对方来信并表达对其兴趣的了解，礼貌且直接。
  1. showcase a variety of…
  • 功能：意为“展示各种各样的……”，比 “show” 更加生动和正式，常用于介绍展品或活动内容。
  1. combines… with…
  • 功能：“将……与……结合”，是描述创新事物时非常有用的搭配，体现了融合与创新。
  1. both artistic and eco-friendly
  • 功能：“既有艺术性又环保”，both... and... 结构可以有效地连接两个并列的优点。
  1. I’m also very grateful for your offer to help.
  • 功能：用于感谢对方主动提出帮助，语气真诚。be grateful for 是“为……而感激”的常用表达。
  1. Your assistance would be greatly appreciated.
  • 功能：比 “Thank you for your help” 更加正式和客气的表达，意为“如果能得到您的帮助，我们将不胜感激”。

生词词义 (Vocabulary):

  1. craftsman (n.)
  • 手工艺人，工匠 (a person who is skilled in a particular craft)
  1. demonstrate (v.)
  • 展示，演示 (to show or make make clear how something is done)
  1. innovative (adj.)
  • 创新的 (featuring new methods; advanced and original)
  1. miniature (adj.)
  • 微型的，小型的 (much smaller than the usual size)
  1. recycled (adj.)
  • 回收利用的 (converted into reusable material)
  1. assistance (n.)
  • 帮助，援助 (the action of helping someone)
  1. promote (v.)
  • 宣传，推广 (to publicize and encourage the sales or use of something)

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