图画作文点评
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Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures—National and} International”. In the essay you should describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and give your comment on the phenomenon. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
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题目要求
本次作文为图画作文，要求以“Cultures—National and International”（文化——民族的与国际的）为题写一篇短文。文章需要包含三个部分：描述图片、阐释其含义以及就此现象发表个人评论。字数要求在200词左右。
写作方向
- 描述图片：图片展示了一位身着中国传统民族服饰、面带微笑的小姑娘。她的形象代表着一种独特的民族文化。这是文章的切入点。
- 阐释含义：文章的核心。需要将图片所代表的“民族文化”与题目中的“国际文化”联系起来。写作的核心论点可以是：在全球化背景下，民族文化不仅不会消失，反而是走向国际的基础。越是具有民族特色的东西，就越能吸引世界的目光，从而成为国际文化的一部分。这是一种相辅相成、辩证统一的关系。
- 个人评论：在结尾部分，提出自己的观点。可以论述我们应该如何对待民族文化和国际文化。正确的态度是：既要保护和弘扬本民族的优秀传统文化，因为它是一个国家身份的象征；也要以开放的心态学习和借鉴其他文化的精华，以促进共同繁荣。
作文
Cultures—National and International
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a lovely little girl is smiling, dressed in a traditional ethnic costume. The image, simple as it is, carries a profound message about the relationship between national and international cultures in an era of globalization.
The implied meaning of the picture is that cultures, to be international, must first be national. In a world that is increasingly interconnected, cultural exchange is more frequent than ever. Some may fear that globalization will lead to the erosion of traditional cultures. However, the truth is that a nation’s unique culture is its identity and its most valuable contribution to the world’s cultural diversity. It is this uniqueness that attracts international interest and appreciation. Therefore, maintaining and celebrating our national heritage is the very foundation for engaging in meaningful international cultural dialogue. What is truly national can become truly international.
From my perspective, we should strike a balance between preserving our national identity and embracing globalization. On one hand, we must protect and promote our traditional arts, customs, and values, as they are the roots of our civilization. On the other hand, we should adopt an open-minded attitude, learning from other cultures to enrich our own. Only by doing so can we ensure that our national culture not only survives but also flourishes on the global stage, contributing to a more colorful and harmonious world.
提示
以下是范文中的一些好词好句和生词，供学习参考：
- As is vividly depicted in the picture…
- 一个非常经典的图画作文开头句式，意为“如图中生动描绘的那样……”。
vividly意为“生动地”，用以增强描述的感染力。
- ethnic costume
- 词组，意为“民族服装”。
ethnic(adj.) 民族的，种族的。
- carries a profound message about…
- 词组，意为“承载着关于……的深刻信息”。用来从图片描述自然过渡到意义阐释，显得有深度。
profound(adj.) 深刻的，深远的。
- In an era of globalization…
- 一个常用的背景介绍短语，意为“在全球化时代……”。
- erosion of traditional cultures
- 词组，意为“传统文化的侵蚀”。
erosion(n.) 原意为“(土地)侵蚀，腐蚀”，此处比喻文化等被逐渐削弱或破坏。
- cultural diversity
- 词组，意为“文化多样性”。是讨论文化话题时的高频核心词汇。
- national heritage
- 词组，意为“民族遗产”。与
traditional culture可替换使用，避免表达重复。
- strike a balance between A and B
- 一个非常实用的句型，意为“在A和B之间取得平衡”。在发表评论、提出解决方案时常用。
- adopt an open-minded attitude
- 词组，意为“采取一种思想开放的态度”。
- flourishes on the global stage
- 词组，意为“在全球舞台上繁荣发展”。
flourish(v.) 繁荣，昌盛。这是一个生动且高级的表达，用来描述文化的 thriving（蓬勃发展）。